Tuesday, 8 October 2013

Campaign about free hugs

Free Hugs for every one


In the video we can see a man who doing a campaign about share the happiness with hugs. he was walking in the downtown while holds sign " free hugs". The first when he wanted to show the action, a lot of people who just smile and move away when he greet, but him never give up. And then the situation was changed when an old women come to him and then him asked to get a hugs from him. the man gladly accept and gave her a hug. the situation was changed after that there are many people saw that and some people wanted get a hugs from the man too. every person who passes are always asked to hugged him like young man, women, old, and kids wanted to get a free hugs from the man.
Because a lot of people there and the campaign that conducted by the man was banned by the police. The man tried to explain what was the purpose of the event. After that, the police allowed him to continued his event. so many people to do the same and finally the man give a signature list to the people who wanted to get a free hug and supported this event. Every one who supported this event will give a signature and finally 10 thousand signature from people was reached. After that the police permit the man to continue his campaign and it's awesome when every people can share a hugs and happiness. This video have a lot of moral, this video can tell us how important respect and share a happiness.

3 comments:

  1. i think u should pay attention on your paragraph.
    better to use 'tab' in beggining of the paragraph so the reader will not become confuse.

    gud :D

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  3. Hello, It's me Griwanasta
    I think you should pay more attention about your grammar and vocabulary selection
    the tenses also quite a mess and i really suggest you to edit it ASAP
    the contents are also not so deep yet
    I think you need to watch once more and re-do the writing
    I also recommend you to change the phrase "In the video" and to carefully select your Topic sentence along with it's supporting sentences

    sorry for my impolite advice, thanks and best regards >_<

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